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Ken is not satisfied with his thesis statement in sentence 3. Which of the following should
replace sentence 3 to provide a more effective thesis statement?

Incomplete question. Options:

f) the aquadom in berlin, Germany, is very tall and made of glass; it is an experience that many people would like to have.

g) for a worthwhile experience, you should go to the aquadom in berlin, Germany; it is a  unique attraction.

h) the aquadom in berlin, Germany, is a completely different kind of aquarium; it is a unique attraction that many people would love to experience.

j) the aquadom in berlin, Germany, is sort of a different kind of an aquarium; it is something many people would like to go see.

Answer:

h) the aquadom in berlin, Germany, is a completely different kind of aquarium; it is a unique attraction that many people would love to experience.

Explanation:

Remember, a thesis statement as used in research refers to a statement of claim about a particular subject. A good thesis statement should be effective, it must be specific, that is have a specific area of focus.

Ken's statement in option h makes a good thesis statement because it is specific; it specifically explains the reason why many would love to visit the aquadom in Germany, which is because it is unique.

Answer:

H. The AquaDom in Berlin, Germany, is a completely different kind of aquarium; it is a  unique attraction that many people would love to experience.

Explanation:

The first paragraph with the original thesis statement is:

(1) When most people think of an aquarium, they probably imagine a fish  tank perched on a stand in someone’s living room. (2) Others might imagine a large  building where visitors gaze at fish behind extremely large plates of glass. (3) The  AquaDom in Berlin, Germany, is an aquarium; it is something that many people  would love to experience.

Now, if you replace sentence 3 with option H, the first paragraph would look like:

(1) When most people think of an aquarium, they probably imagine a fish  tank perched on a stand in someone’s living room. (2) Others might imagine a large  building where visitors gaze at fish behind extremely large plates of glass. (H) The AquaDom in Berlin, Germany, is a completely different kind of aquarium; it is a  unique attraction that many people would love to experience.

Notice how the first paragraph sounds a lot better than it originally was. Option H is a good thesis because it summarizes the main point of Kevin's essay.

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Read the following paragraph and then answer the question that follows:

Video games can kill! That is what many who support legislation banning violent titles from underage players have stated. These supporters of video game reform cite studies that show increased statistics of violence among children who play games regularly at home. Opponents of this reform, however, have expressed doubts about the validity of the studies, requesting that further research be done before a dramatic statement is made about all gamers. It seems that the rising popularity of video games among youth has spiked a political debate that may last for several more years to come.

Which sentence from this paragraph is the topic sentence? (5 points)

(1) It seems that the rising popularity of video games among youth has spiked a political debate that may last for several more years to come.
(2) That is what many who support legislation banning violent titles from underage players have stated.
(3) Video games can kill!
(4) Opponents of this reform, however, have expressed doubts about the validity of the studies, requesting that further research be done before a dramatic statement is made about all gamers.

Mike: My friends❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Which one completes the sentence above?
A) helps their mother
B) has omelette for breakfast
C) go to a dance course on Tuesdays
D) likes cheese

Which way usually works best to organize research information?

A.write a second research question and answer it

B.create an outline and fill in information learned

C.get rid of facts you probably won't use to narrow focus

D.put the information in alphabetical order

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symbol of the repressed emotions of the narrator/protagonist?

A. The personified Raven is symbolic of his refusal to accept
Lenore's death.

B. The personified Raven is symbolic of his refusal to accept that
the Raven only articulates “Never more...”

C. The personified Raven is symbolic of his irrational mind.

D. The personified Raven is symbolic of his rational mind.

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Story:”The Human Genome Project”
One of the most significant themes in "The Human Gonome Project" is the importance of analyzing DNA molecules in order to answer many questions about how genes function. Which of the following sentence from the text directly support this conclusion? Select three that apply.
•They then retrieved the deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA) from these samples, which is found in the body’s 46 chromosomes.
•Scientists involved in the project have already finished mapping, or “sequencing”, DNA molecules, showing the location of genes.
•For instance, there is only a very small number of genes accountable for the difference in skin color.
•Because of the project, scientists have identified more than 1400 disease genes so far for such conditions as diabetes, Alzheimer’s, and certain forms of colon and breast cancer.
•By studying how these genes work, medical reasearchers can try to improve treatments.

............... of staging a play that help the audience understand its structure and meaning.

a. Specific aspects
b. When specific aspects
c. Specific aspects are
d. There are specific aspects​

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