Would anyone be willing to read my story and give me feedback? It has two completed chapters and a few sentences on chapter three. "Seth and Sila hate each other, but what happens when Seth makes a bet on Sila?" That is what its about, so if it sounds interesting and you will actually read it, let me know! If you want to read it, I'll send you the link. Please dont answer this post unless you will actually read it :)

Answer:

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Explanation:

How can you tell that this passage is from the end of the personal narrative? After that first day at camp, I had sworn I would never come back. But by the end of the week, I realized that not only did I learn some cool stuff, but I actually had fun. Who would have thought that I-a born and bred city girl -would actually like milking a cow? I guess it's important to give things a chance before you make up your mind about them. Now, I can't wait for the next new thing to come along.

O It sets up the problem and introduces the author.

O It gives details and explains the conflict the author faced.

O It shares what the author learned from the experience.

O It tells about the process of milking a cow at camp.​

Read the excerpt from Claudette Colvin: Twice Toward Justice by Phillip Hoose, and then answer the question.

“We had been studying the Constitution in Miss Nesbitt's class. I knew I had rights. . . . I was thinking, Why should I have to get up just because a driver tells me to, or just because I'm black?” Colvin said.

Which is the best paraphrase of the excerpt?

Colvin explained that after studying the Constitution at school, she felt that her rights were being violated. She questioned why she should have to get up if she had paid her fare.
She had been studying the Constitution and knew that she did not have to get up from her seat just because she is black.
After studying the Constitution, I knew I had rights and I did not have to give up my seat for anyone just because of the color of my skin.
Colvin knew she had rights because she had studied the Constitution in Miss Nesbitt’s class. And so, she began to wonder why she was being treated so unfairly.

what was the authors purpose for writing malala yousafzai: a normal yet powerful girl?

True or false: The closing sentence of a paragraph should be exactly the same as the topic sentence

I will mark you brainliest

What revisions are most necessary to improve
sentence fluency in this passage? Select three options.

O using complete, grammatically correct sentences

Beginning more sentences with prepositional phrases

O using transitions to clarify the connections between
ideas

correcting run-on sentences by creating shorter
sentences

O combining short sentences to create compound and
complex sentences

The metaphor" All the world is a stage, and we are all just actors." what does it mean?

all about boston globe

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Read the following excerpt from “Raymond’s Run” and answer the question.

...I’ve got a roomful of ribbons and medals and awards. But what has Raymond got to call his own?

What two things are being compared in this juxtaposition?

• Squeaky’s race medals vs. Raymond’s race medals
• Squeaky’s May Day race vs. Raymond’s May Day race
• Squeaky’s achievements vs. Raymond’s achievements
• Squeaky’s perception of Raymond vs. public perception of Raymond

Hint: Juxtaposition means a literary technique in which two or more ideas, characters, actions, settings, phrases, or words are put side-by-side for the purpose of creating a comparison or contrast

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Read this passage from chapter 5 of The Prince.

There are, for example, the Spartans and the Romans. The Spartans held Athens and Thebes, establishing there an oligarchy: nevertheless they lost them. The Romans, in order to hold Capua, Carthage, and Numantia, dismantled them, and did not lose them. They wished to hold Greece as the Spartans held it, making it free and permitting its laws, and did not succeed. So to hold it they were compelled to dismantle many cities in the country, for in truth there is no safe way to retain them otherwise than by ruining them. And he who becomes master of a city accustomed to freedom and does not destroy it, may expect to be destroyed by it, for in rebellion it has always the watchword of liberty and its ancient privileges as a rallying point, which neither time nor benefits will ever cause it to forget. And whatever you may do or provide against, they never forget that name or their privileges unless they are disunited or dispersed, but at every chance they immediately rally to them, as Pisa after the hundred years she had been held in bondage by the Florentines.

What is Machiavelli’s primary purpose in writing this passage?

to inform readers about the history of Rome and Sparta and how they built their empires
to inform readers about the fates of the cities conquered by the Spartans and the Romans
to persuade readers that a conquering prince must destroy a former republic if he hopes to hold it
to persuade readers that a republic will remember freedom and someday rebel against a conqueror

To which of the following situations does the word interactions best apply?

A. a child watching others playing in a playground

B. someone sitting in a hotel room, thinking of home

C.two strangers striking up a conversation about things in common

D someone waiting in a restaurant for a friend who never shows up

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Which statement best describes how Paul Fleischman uses the characters in Seedfolks to deepen readers' understanding of the "working as a community" theme?

Making his characters somewhat familiar with and interested in gardening allows them to form friendships easily.
Creating characters who have financial difficulties supports their willingness to cooperate with others.
Making his characters aware of the dangers in the vacant lot supports their need to depend on each other.
Creating characters who feel out of place in some way highlights their need to find common ground with their neighbors.

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For this assignment, you will work in a group to create a multimedia presentation to promote personal and community health. Your presentation should describe the nutrition and fitness programs offered in your community and specifically advocate for one of these programs (one of each type: one nutrition, one fitness) by showing the benefits of the program and its importance to and impact on your community. Background Information The multimedia presentation is a stand-alone, automated presentation that should be created using slide presentation software. The presentation should include the required information with slides, video clips, photos, and sound. The sound may be a narrative or music. The presentation should be three to five (3-5) minutes in length. This presentation should be designed as an advocacy tool for nutrition and fitness in your community.

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Read the following excerpt.

jaylen, for example, has tourettes syndrome. However, no matter what the reason, bullying is wrong. Instead of hurting eech other, we shoudl all learn to embrace our differences and get alowng.

This excerpt needs to be edited for

spelling and capitalization.
grammar and punctuation.
word spacing and spelling.
punctuation and word spaci

Which of these situations illustrate common Finance workplaces and tasks? Check all that apply.
Karen works at a desk processing applications on her computer.
O Foster interviews school applicants in their homes.
O Ryan operates the cash register in a grocery store.
Sang meets with a customer in a private room to discuss taxes.
O Marie schedules appointments in a doctor's office.
Eva leads a meeting to explain the results of her risk analysis to coworkers.

____________: a formal message from people on the same hierarchy level.
a.
Grapevine
b.
Compatible
c.
Lateral
d.
Organization

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When Master Hugh takes Douglass's money from working, Douglass realizes

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An individual leads a sedentary lifestyle. which activity would most likely help this person reach a moderate activity level? A. sleeping B. carrying C. standing D. jogging.​

1. PART A: What is the meaning of the word "swindlers" as it
is used in paragraph 2?
O A Traveling people who weave clothes
OB Magicians who weave magical clothes
c Scammers who con people for money
D Spies who lie for information

3. Social media has played an instrumental role in getting students more involved in activist movements such as BLM.

When it comes to fiction, is it most important to choose a book that
Abel
is engaging
is easy to read.
lists a lot of facts.
helps you learn about a topic.

A grade point average indicates a student’s performance in a single course. after-school courses. required courses. all courses.

[BRAINLIEST] In a formal argument, what is the relationship between reasons and evidence?
Answer choice;
**Reasons are logical explanations, while evidence consists mainly of anecdotes to illustrate the writer’s point.
**Reasons are given to back up the writer’s evidence, which in turn proves the claim.
**Reasons explain why the claim is valid, and evidence backs up the reasons with facts.
**Reasons and evidence are different words for the explanations that back up a writer’s claim.

Read this excerpt from Allen Ginsberg’s "A Supermarket in California." Wives in the avocados, babies in the tomatoes!—and you, Garcia Lorca, what were you doing down by the watermelons? Ginsberg most likely makes this allusion to Garcia Lorca to show his respect for Lorca for being an unconventional poet. celebrate his affinity for Spanish culture and language. explain his confusion over Lorca’s desire for cultural conformity. describe their role in contributing to American consumerism.

Read the excerpt from Immigrant Kids by Russell
Freedman.
Which lines from the excerpt are an example of
paraphrasing by the author?
The voyage was an ordeal,, but it was worth it. They
were on their way to America
.
O My mother, my stepfather, my brother Giuseppe, anc
my two sisters clustered on the foredeck
The steamer Florida, fourteen days out of Naples,
filled to capacity with 1600 natives of Italy..
The voyage was an ordeal, but it was worth it. They
were on their way to America.
My first impressions of the New World will always
remain etched in my memory
The great majority of immigrants landed in New York
City, at America's busiest port. They never forgot their
first glimpse of the Statue of Liberty.
Edward Corsi, who later became United States
Commissioner of Immigration, was a ten-year-old
Italian immigrant when he sailed into New York harbor
in 1907:
My first impressions of the New World will always remain
etched in my memory. particularly that hazy October
morning when I first saw Ellis lsland. The steamer Florida,
fourteen days out of Naples, filled to capacity with 1600
natives of italy, had weathered one of the worst storms in
our captain's memory: and glad we were, both child